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Mokou sure is hot ain't she? Haha!

Jokes aside, this is a great picture! The scenery is stunning and the tones are nice and soft. I love the glow on the fire and the lighting it gives off is perfect! Last but not least, those eyes. Nothing short of phenomenal.

While I like this pic, there are a few faults I see. First, it seems her chin juts out too far, but maybe that's just me. Also her ear is quite tiny. Two noticeable errors but they don't detract from the picture as a whole. Keep up the good work.
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marikyuun Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whaaahhh Thank you so much for the critique, Roku!! ;A;

I tried my best with the colours, since I wanted to draw a harmonious picture (they play an important role on that, now don't they?!) and since it was my first time, I wasn't very secure on how I'd do it even though I got a lot of help choosing them so I'm glad it came out alright;;

About the chin and the face in general, I don't really see what the problem is, but that's probably because that's how I'm used to drawing faces xDD but if you think it's too far, I'll try to be more careful with it from now on, I promise!! Maybe her ear looks quite small, I don't know... But lol once again, I still have quite a lot of trouble with structures and anatomy in general.

Thank you very much once again and I'll make sure to keep on trying my best to fix those mistakes and improve!!! ^q^
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