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Nazrin Drawn Again by RokuGurin Nazrin Drawn Again by RokuGurin
I've wanted to do this for some time. I was once proud of this pic because it was an attempt at a dramatic pose. Looking back at it now, goodness was this bad! I mean the pose I was still proud of but it needed improvement and some parts were colored rather sloppily.

So I decided to draw her again. Since she's Nazrin. :iconnazrinplz:

Here's a link to the original:
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Hope you guys like it!


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Hyperdeity Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I disagree with AlexMdle, I think you have improved, the colors are more vivid the poses are slightly more dynamic (in the lower part of the dress for example) and the characters have gained some weight to them, but some may like the skinnier version better in that regard. Also the 2012 drawing had a bit more perspective to it thanks to the way the face was drawn, both drawings have their positives : ) .
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luckyhalo303 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's nice to see this! 0_0 *thumbs up*
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Oblivexx Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
hmm I would expect that these memes be used for like 5 - 10 year plan. However, here i see that there have been improvements to more "hair breaks" and the definition in Nazrin's eyes.
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AlexMdle Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
"Very noticeable" is the last word I would use. Both pictures look almost identical. There is certainly no indication of improvement, only different proportions. You can literally swap both pictures around and nobody would be the wiser to the order they would actually be drawn in.
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RokuGurin Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, I wouldn't go that far. They only look identical because I used the same pose.
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AlexMdle Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Sorry, but I got to disagree. I don't mind the same position, or colors. It's just that both of those pictures literally look like they were drawn days apart. There is no improvement on the lineart, no increase in picture detail or composition. Even the lighting and shade effects used are fundamentally the same. Hell, the clothing shading of the first picture actually looks better done than that of the second one.

Literally, try this. Remove the "before/after" and time indicators from both pictures and present them to people who have not seen either of the two before. Then ask their opinion on which one looks like it was drawn first and which was drawn second.
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Neamid Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist
Though the art hasn't changed immensely there is improvement, it doesn't look drastically different but yes, the artist has improved. The hair flows a bit more realistically, the shading looks better, her eyes are more defined and the clothes look more loose, so no, the pictures are not identical
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KonekoArt122 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Hey... I get your point, and I understand what you're saying...
I even agree with you, but this is starting to sound mean. The artist thinks they improved, let them think that. Even if you think otherwise, which you have a reason to in your own way. But by saying that in THAT WAY, you probably offended the artist and/or made them feel bad about it.
Again, you have a great point, but you probably shouldn't say it that way. I'm not trying to be rude or mean to you, either.
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AlexMdle Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
"let them think that"

That is plain terrible and disgustingly dishonest. I am at loss of words of how ill that advice is.
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KonekoArt122 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to offend you. But I just wanted to say if you don't think they improved and they think they did, let them thing what they want.
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AlexMdle Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Isn't that what happens anyway?
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KonekoArt122 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Actually, looking at it again, I beg to disagree. I think that the shading, proportions, hair definition and style have greatly improved.
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chazzpineda Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Very noticeable improvement :).
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autumnshards Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
haha amazing
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Imimi-Ai Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fantastic improvement~!
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V1902 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist
SOFTER, BETTER, SMOOTHER, ROUNDER
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lupelongo Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
much better :3
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Deidarafangirlartist Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're getting a lot better! This is really impressive.
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Baktl Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconohjoyzplz:Yaaaaaaayzzz!!!!:iconbigheartplz:You did it!!!!:iconbigheartplz:
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Masatog Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The face, shading and proportion looks much better now. You have definitely improved, I must say.
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Riley-Vace Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HUGE PROGRESS

KUDOS TO YOU
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yuki-oto Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nazrin lost her basket and now she's trying to go find it XD
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RokuGurin Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nazrin's Basket Quest!
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yuki-oto Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can definitely see that becoming an indie game XD
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Loki-Megabyte Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice improvements .the lower torso has better balance and colors and details much cuter.
overall most of the notable change is the use of space & form.

The original while nice for it's time was a bit bland,the newer version shows the potential that was previously locked.
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Icyshadowlord Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
She looking cute c:
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deltari2 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Nazrin looks kinda chubier and livelier with the new color with the after part :D
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SickChimera Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Quite the improvement from last year I must say
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Nazrininator Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Well, that was a 5% improvement. The 2013 one looks good.
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SigmaEleven Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
She got fat. I guess.
Sorry. :iconpapmingplz:
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MissHornet Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh definitely improvement :D
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azutesai Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My, such quick improvement! I love seeing these "before and after" kind of Memes.
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Rouge-Fox Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Writer
There is improvement in anatomy but whilst maintaining the same style which is impressive
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